My good friend and I, as some of you know, are working on a PC Role-Playing Game- formerly known as Zak LeRoi, which is the name of the main character until we worked out the story and came up with a name. We are naming this project The Lost Keys of Alraith. Here's the single-paragraph spiel my partner wrote up:

As with any day we begin it by waking up. Zak LeRoi, a young peasant villager in the rolling hills of Alraith wakes up to the sound of crackling fire and whistling wind. He finds the village charred black and reduced to ashes. Zak's memory is all but gone, he remembers one thing: He was there when the fire erupted and the culprit he'd seen commit the crime was King Rizya, the king of Alraith. There were only a few survivors from the fire, none of which were Zak's family... he leaves the destruction and swears vengeance under his breath, "King Rizya must pay."

We welcome any constructive feedback! We'd love to hear great suggestions, and more than that we'd love to use great suggestions.

Note: the old thread is at viewtopic.php?f=9&t=11457, and if this project sounds interesting to you we'll first and foremost post updates on our blog at http://play-dd-games.blogspot.com/

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- Lincoln Bergeson